24 February 2009

Haiku 55

David Beckham's bulge
Eye-level on each kiosk
Shoppers walk on by

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White bright light of noon
Shadowless on the water
Gulls swoop on garbage

2 comments:

sfmike said...

How very John Cage of you.

pjwv said...

Ha ha! Since I'm going to fix this, I should explain that when I tried (repeatedly) to post, the text didn't show up although the title did. Maybe I should just leave it as a conceptual art piece.

This happened once before, but outsiders could see the post even though I couldn't. I checked the status list on blogger.com and couldn't find any mention of this. Does anyone have any idea what is going on with this?